Tuesday 4 May 2010

Orpheus and Eurydice


Walk in the land that time forgot
(the land remembers, we do not)
and in the sickly-scented shade
of Cypress trees, an esplanade
will point the way to where there stood
a temple, in a silent wood
of Cedars from the Lebanon.

This grove of living censers found
the perfume that they spread around
with roots, sunk deep into the land
where incense lies and where they stand,
like priests upon the mountainside.

A fading fresco on a wall -
a broken picture - can recall
in words as vivid as a thought,
a memory which if left to aught
but flowers, would too soon decay,
lose it's colour, fade away
like Orpheus and Eurydice.

5 comments:

  1. Oh, very good! So poignant. And kind of sad.

    but flowers, would too soon decay,
    lose it's colour, fade away
    like Orpheus and Eurydice.

    Even the fresco will fade. Sad indeed.

    I wish I had this kind of skill with poetry. I've often been inspired by art and other stories, but I don't think I could manage a poem out of it.

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  2. This was my juvenile attempt at a poem, written about 34 years ago - the only one, you'll be pleased to hear! I wanted to see if I could remember it (I can't remember if verse 2 is the same, as it's sort of out of balance with the others), and if I still thought the same way about it as I did then. I was a bit obsessed with ancient Greece then, and the landscape, etc. It's sort of got something, but it's pretty crappy.

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  3. I missed out the word 'if' too - oops, must have been the Retsina...

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